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Lost Opportunity of Love
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Lost Opportunity of Love |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
Browsing through CD aisles casually flicking through 'B' can you see? - it's all for show. Just waiting, waiting, waiting.. for you. To walk through those doors. To lay my eyes upon your soft face. Drink in each feature, all perfectly shaped, floppy hair falls forward. Then my dream comes true, In you walk, nonchalant and cool. Are you acting too? I glance over my shoulder, see you glance too. But I'm tongue tied, heart racing palms sweating. the butterflies are on speed. I glance away. Voices in the background, yells are just a blue. Too aware of my flushed cheek, these shaking hands, i clench into fists. Willing the power, to over my awkwardness, standing around totally out of place. So I open my mouth, but it's too late. Again, my voice catches in my throat. My eyes glisten as I watch Your retreating back, smaller every second. And I know, I'm never to see you again. The greatest thing you'll ever learn, is just to love and be loved in return. |
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cherrys_rule Member
since 2006-03-18
Posts 442 |
Awww... that's really sad. I'm sorry that happened to you, it did happen to you right? Well I like this one by you. It was really good. Keep on writing. |
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Sorrow Member
since 2006-06-14
Posts 83Ireland |
Unrequited love is the most painful thing in the world...Believe me it's a pain I know only to well. |
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perfect stranger Member
since 2006-05-29
Posts 54on cloud 9 |
this is really sad, but as my granny used to say there is a lid for every teapot,give it time and you will meet someone kind. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
aw friend this is so beautifully written and so true love ya lor can you find me space inside your bleeding heart? |
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