Dark Poetry #4 |
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My Secret Life |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
What's Control? Domination? The ability of living for someone else? Ignorance? Lack of hair. Voodoo slave Miserable distant trust Untrusting Puke Spinal cord reception of callous fingers Personal desire What I've always wanted Committment Honest Insanity These thoughts deep inside my head Revealled as art in the light of diety Freedom of my mind Choose what I will Self-confident and discipline Distant from before Weakness slip away From my own Under solid Catchy aquaintence That wall of dark, near the brim Spill into the light Its all so clear and bright Know why and understand Almost there Closer and closer In contact with God Surrounded Just a peek Almost there To know him Honest salvation. All that is great once was small. |
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Dragon Mistress Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 289Washington, USA. |
good stuff...not much more to say there!!! ~*~I'm a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~ |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
Voodoo...lolz, i don't know y, but the way this word is pronounced makes me laugh even though it's a serius word...but then again...putting pins in dolls expecting someone to feel it is sadly funny anyways...lol...um, ok, your poem, right, i think it was great, you asked some good questions at the beggining...and i can really identify with the rest of this write too...darn it, i could highlight, copy and paste the whole thing and talk about how i agree with it. lol. the ending caught my attention especially though...i was wondering, do you really believe in God? just curius. catch ya laterz bro =). - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thanx. I believe in God i believe in a lot more than just him. I believe in the Goddess and the God. I believe everything has a soul. I have some pretty deep beliefs, actually. GIS All that is great once was small. |
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