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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY 
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ROLLER COASTER Up and down my heart goes, loving with all I've got. How happy I am when you notice me, how sad when I think you've forgot. This ride it goes on forever, and at times I just want out. Loop 'da loop, around again. What is this all about? Together forever, then just friends, you say you still love me, but then the ride ends. No more phone calls, not even a quick letter. Is that too hard? If I forgot you would that be better? Yes the ride was worth it, but the fun ended too fast. I want to ride again. I want to make it last. Savor every loop and turn, appreciate the ride a little more. Let go of the screams freely, not cover my eyes like before! ~Appreciate what you've got now and try to make every moment memorable because before you know it, it may be taken from ya!~ (RIP DAD--I Miss You!!)  ELMO"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!" |
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Asian Rain Member
since 2003-10-11
Posts 73 |
"I want to ride again. I want to make it last. Savor every loop and turn" Life and relationships with their ups and downs, indeed so often like a rollercoaster ride. Wonderful write, enjoyed! |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Thanx Asian Rain!! ELMO |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this hits home, very close |
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click1 Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152usa |
AHHhh...such is life..well done it looks good on the page and sounds good to the ear..tears and smiles..what a range reached in such a short poem...Good job! thanx! Click |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Tears :'( |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Thank you sooo much for the nice replies--I'm glad you were able to relate to it in some way!!  ELMO"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!" |
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redrobin21865 Junior Member
since 2003-11-09
Posts 12Florida, USA |
very touching and very truthful. really enjoyed it |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
nice |
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ranidae_poet Member
since 2003-11-05
Posts 66Texas,USA |
I love the last line. this is really good. thanks for sharing. |
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WildPoet Member
since 2003-11-10
Posts 205California |
Great work! Where do I buy a ticket? WildPoet |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
LOL--thanx all--You can have my ticket WildPoet!! ELMO"No man is EVER worth my tears, and the one who is, will never make me cry!" |
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