Dark Poetry #4 |
Untitled - On Anxiety |
zt88 Junior Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 11 |
Cry for revolution, and I will join you Not for the political, nor the world But for my knots inside Give to me your kind words and shoulder, And tell me you were the same... That you were uneasy, guilty and no stranger to shame That your flame was bright but shaded by anxiety That you had a message like the one locked inside of me You saw the truth but you just couldn’t believe, Because the truth itself was the hardest to conceive... Please tell me you triumphed over all your apprehension That you are no more a slave to all the pain and tension That you can honestly say you believe in yourself… - ZT. |
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niere Member
since 2006-04-23
Posts 77 |
i really liked this - the whole notion of a self-revolution... it's really cool. it's a pity when some one really great can't see themselves how great they are.... a really good piece. |
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zt88 Junior Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 11 |
Thank you...ZT. |
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Alone in the dark Member
since 2006-02-10
Posts 105On the edge of an abyss |
I can relate to the pain you express, because it mirrors my own. I hope someday you will be able to believe in youself. I hope we all can. |
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pullingxthextrigger Member
since 2006-05-01
Posts 133MA,..USA llx |
very very nice. keep it up ~nora<3 your pulling the trigger, pulling the trigger all wrong llx - P!ATD! |
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