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blitz Junior Member
since 2006-04-26
Posts 19 |
when i watched her die i felt something, something more inner than i ever felt before i watched her face full of pain i looked into her eyes as she cried i swear theirs more love her pain filled fear stricken, tear filled face as she died but what i sensed was different than what i saw in her eyes full of sorrow and fear i sensed she was happy about what i believe it was the thought of me being near her when she was dieing her tears as the ran along her cheek bone i sensed a type of concern i wanted to take her in my arms but i couldn't move when her face paled i sensed a strong feeling like when the one i use to get when i look into her eyes and smile i felt oddly calm and i knew i knew she loved me but i couldn't say anything she died a minute later all i have of her is my memory now itake suicide as a way to end the pain but if i do then i know i will never see her again as long as i help people i may have a chance perhaps maybe see her loving face in someone else |
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curiouse Member
since 2006-03-21
Posts 277england |
gosh...blitz this is amazing,lol..fria again, it's so touching because i can see there is so much paission and feeling envoked to the writing.. I love it smiles, me! i'm looking for you...always... |
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