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Dark Poetry #4

Mask

Skip
New Member

since 2006-04-13

Posts 8
Texas,Usa

0 posted 2006-04-15 11:10 AM

-Mask-

Hiding is what I've learned to do,
im smiling covering up,
everything im hiding from you.
Im wearing a mask to cover my sadness,
behind my makeup behind my smilies,
is nothing but pure unconsciousness.
People think im very smart,
but what they don’t know is,
everything im hiding in the dark.
With this mask I make them see,
who im not but,
who I want to be.
Silent crys they will never hear,
broken sorrow,
left with fear.
With this mask they will never know,
all my pain all my feelings,
I will never show.
I walk around with an empty chest,
talking to people,
who think they know best.
With this mask my disappearence will be unknown,
cause of all the feelings,
I've left unshown.

rockbabe
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 105

1 posted 2006-04-17 03:27 AM

Strangely enough, this could have been written by me
Cause this is exactly how I feel at this point in time !!

Very Nice ..I felt every WORD!!!

SATURN
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 78
ok,us

2 posted 2006-04-18 12:13 PM

This is talking not only about you but just about every other person and me nice write and very emotional. hope to see more from you.

SATURN
AKA
~Hali~

Skip
New Member

since 2006-04-13

Posts 8
Texas,Usa

3 posted 2006-04-22 03:34 PM

Thanks for the comments!! This poem was very emotional for me cause its what im going through right now, I feel like noone knows what I go through...

~Skip~
*AKA*
~Haley~

aliway
Member

since 2006-03-05

Posts 185
With in your eyes

4 posted 2006-04-23 07:42 PM

Nice poem
That’s how I feel not that long ago
until I couldn’t take it any more and it all came out

*leah

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