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shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20
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inside the shadows

0 posted 2008-01-26 08:48 AM


I live behind
a shield;
my heart bound
within these walls

Everywhere I turn,
people slashing at my heart
with their already
blood-soaked razorblades

A dark red crimson
flowing from my veins
with traces
of regret

But look at me now,
I'm just fine
lying on the ice, cold floor;
Crimsons the result

when their silver razorblades
turned red

[&] she's a blood broken rose

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XxForever.BrokenxX
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Neverland
1 posted 2008-01-26 03:56 PM


I feel the same. This is an amazing poem. I DO know how you feel, you just don't know it.

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20
Posts 247
inside the shadows
2 posted 2008-01-26 04:21 PM


But you don't know how I feel.  This poem is about how when people push me down and trample me under their feet.  When I feel like I'm spinning in circles with no where to escape.  When their blood-soaked razorblades turned red.
TJ

[&] she's a blood broken rose

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