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Dark Poetry #4

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lostpoet25
New Member

since 2006-03-11

Posts 6
Illinois, USA

0 posted 2006-03-13 12:14 PM

Can you find sanctity, within theses hallowed halls?
A ghost of the past reaches out to you
Calling to you, with the sweetness of a past lover
You reach out, searching for something real
Something tangible in which to place your hope
For when reality hits you, like a shot in the dark
Catching you unaware, while your mind drifts
Among days of old, long lost to you
You realize in horror there is nothing
Just total desolation
Stripped of all humanity
You bask in the darkness, unseen by all
For there are none to see you, you are alone
Slowly, your sanity begins to slip
Your mind spirals deeper into complete dementia
Where you shall remain...forever lost.

sevencrimson
New Member

since 2006-03-14

Posts 3

1 posted 2006-03-14 02:42 PM

absolutley beautiful. I love it.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

2 posted 2006-03-14 02:51 PM

sounds like alzheimer's, intense.

A cange is going to come...

sgreybe
Member

since 2000-04-28

Posts 209
London, UK

3 posted 2006-03-18 06:06 AM

Hey there. I haven't read this one! Great piece. Sylvia

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

4 posted 2006-03-19 12:24 PM

Awesome write. Hope to see more of your poems around soon.

~Alli~

alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

5 posted 2006-03-20 01:42 PM

Lovely.
Until...ali {the Queen of Darkness}

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."-alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch, and make you bleed it isn't worth it"-alibaster

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