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IntoTheRain
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 51
Westwood, CA

0 posted 2006-01-29 02:34 PM

The lilacs desired your love
and bent in the wind to follow your steps
the rolling waves
a craving
the desire, the stain

Remember the summer
we were amazed
swayed by passion
drifting aimlessly
the noon, the heat

Doubts arose, the stream diverged
summer fades to fall
the willow, leaves shaped like lockets
like embers to the earth
the fall, the summer caught inside

In spring the garden blooms
the lilacs from memory
reciting last year's notes
the wind recalling
the merging, the fading

Like a statue
carved in waiting
frozen, a lasting winter
lilac bloom forgotten, leaves about my feet
my silence speaks for me

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2006-01-29 03:23 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS ROB!
I very much enjoyed your words..
Looking forward to more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

2 posted 2006-01-31 10:04 AM

i applaud you my friend. This was beautiful

'Remember the summer
we were amazed
swayed by passion
drifting aimlessly
the noon, the heat'

wow. and i loved the way you wrapped the emotion in such a well chosen pick of words. Excellent write and weclome to PiP

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2006-01-31 01:53 PM

Rob~
There is sheer beauty in the fall of your ink~

WELCOME to PiP~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - [email protected]

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

4 posted 2006-02-02 07:34 AM

WOW!
fantastic write - I loved it

a warm welcome to passions, I know you will enjoy it here.

~hugs~

Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
— W. E. Channing

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

5 posted 2006-02-04 12:42 PM

Oh goody, I could get used to this.

Welcome to Pip Rob.

Hollow.
Courts.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2006-03-18 11:18 AM

I saw your name in Open, so decided to treat myself to your first poem, Rob. Welcome to Passions! Please, check your email for a Very Special Greeting!

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

7 posted 2006-03-19 12:25 PM

Welcome to Pip!! Excellent first post!

~Alli~

electricxheart
Member

since 2004-09-05

Posts 184
far away from home.

8 posted 2006-03-19 06:55 PM

wow...this was truly beautiful.
took my breath away.

--kelly

alibaster
Member

since 2001-07-07

Posts 299
In my own private hell...(PA).

9 posted 2006-03-20 01:44 PM

Welcome, welcome, welcome.
Lovely words.
Until...ali {the Queen of Darkness}

"There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul."-alibaster

"If it doesn't bite, scratch, and make you bleed it isn't worth it"-alibaster

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