Dark Poetry #4 |
Cracked Open Door |
tatalinia Member
since 2005-12-17
Posts 137CA, US |
this journey you walk with me what is it you want from me that you dare to try this with me dare to try and keep up with me as i rest in your arms night an day see the things you do for me how can i resist your love its like you were sent from heaven above always been the picky type nick picking over things i dont like til i met you i put things on hold never in my life trying something so bold not sure what it is i want in you not sure is it just me trying something new in the end will i throw it away an move on my way ? who knows for i question my heart not sure will i tear us apart when my tempor errupts leaving what i need so much i can never be to sure for my cracked open hearts door is opening again today but still i try so hard to run away in the end who knows what we will be just enjoy today the you and me for when your having fun it goes by so quickly an dont say i never warned you of who im wickedly I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health |
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brother stone Junior Member
since 2006-01-25
Posts 28 |
i'm glad i read this because i am sad from this very same thing on the man's side. my lady is so much this with me, here and somewhere else and then here again. brother stone thought she could have been the one writing the poem. i will try to do what you said in the last verse. maybe thats the way. |
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xFromtheHeartx Member
since 2005-09-24
Posts 80Florida U.S. |
wow,truely... amazing? i loved this piece. i can relate to this somewhat. me and my girlfriend never fight about what we dont like, but we have out spats about her not letting me pay. but yes, this truely was a good write. im looking foward to seeing more from you, peace Darkness fallows the currupted Martyr... |
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