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Alienated Again
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UseTheIllusion Member
since 2006-02-06
Posts 223In a state of limbo |
Alienated again, Rendered an alien in my own land, Felt the presence of Satan’s weathered hands, And searching for a place to make my last stand. Channel the abuse, Into whatever given use, Friendship is a ruse, People are not obtuse. Companionship a scam, Relationships a sham, And as always I do what I can. Coping with the pressure It is difficult to measure, Repress and success, Do both at your leisure. People are not sympathetic When you are at your most pathetic, And you are surrounded by hostile sycophants. Everyone pleases everyone else, I am the exception to the rule, When everyone else sells out, And everyone else fishes in the same pool. Self serving fishes fighting over the food, There is no doubt that their ways are quite crude. The fishbowl isn’t big enough for the mass of us, And my relationships are all a failure, this is a bust, They are all old enough to have grown stale, and are covered in a brown rust. |
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rockbabe Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 105 |
I think that your poem is very well written.I am still new to this whole poem writing business...and I hope that on e day I will be able to even just write half as good as you. Take a bow!! |
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tatalinia Member
since 2005-12-17
Posts 137CA, US |
dang, this is one hell of a write you have here. very nicely written I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
you're a great writer! |
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