Dark Poetry #4 |
Angel Of Evil |
tatalinia Member
since 2005-12-17
Posts 137CA, US |
an angel she was flowing like the morning rain destroying hearts as she past through voice sang out tunes making even women bow her breathe of life lifting those up for a small season shuting them down in the end taking the long route home you die in your mind no longer can you move you are paralyzed on the road again bag on your shoulders dead to the world to the way things are of the now another prey she has captured feeding to her children in the nest they await to eat off your hurting soul captured by those piercing eyes that dug deep inside you being torn apart from left to right forgeting to fight back you succumb to your death falling into their pit into their mouths they destroy you she stands watching til you are gone then shes off for another one knowing you will find no other as she she is off to find another to feed opening mouths starving souls await for her in line men fighting women crying saying sing to me your lullaby crying to the night your body rings pushing away everything that might help bring you back to life you scorn the true being of truth into a web of the pit i have fallen for her love and charm i to am hurting she is drinking my life away taking everything i need today sepperated by an angel of evil you lock yourself inside her wings as she drinks me up and takes my dreams falling apart we will forever be i fight for what i need so much but she has won the battle she has won now im thrown into the dungeon that so many others have gone as well to fight for the right to love you still I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Yeah, love is pretty intense. God bless, -GIS So what if my wings are too scratched, cut, and beat up to fly... I'll walk. |
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sanozatsho Junior Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 14 |
yes, life is a long tough journey. love only complicates it. though, this love can be a tool to help you through, to continue on. to fight, not only in life but in love as well. very nice description of an anti angel. perhaps though you could have gone in to detail as to what she looked like. not just her acts. |
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tatalinia Member
since 2005-12-17
Posts 137CA, US |
i left the rest of the poem for the reader to paint, let them make her into whatever their mind sees . I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health |
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rockbabe Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 105 |
I think that you poem is very well expressed....very well done!!I could see your pain. |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
Excellent. Love is not just difficult but it is also a beautiful feeling and just, mere existence when you are in love. Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free |
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SATURN Member
since 2004-05-04
Posts 78ok,us |
Great write love is a powerful thing loved it ~Hali~ |
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deadkiss Junior Member
since 2006-02-11
Posts 31washington |
reminds me of a previous relationship. beautifully written, i think the only way out of the cell is for someone to come along with the key. and set you free. |
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