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Dark Poetry #4

Slave of Love

Kaos
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

0 posted 2006-01-25 01:36 PM

And the duckling sat
     (quack   quack)
a slave to the subconscious 'norm'
  standards set by what everyone else thinks
I almost pity    but how patronizing is that
    it just goes to the current and the pack
comfortable    sheltered   in a life not his
Here i sit
    ( quack)
in the back of the line
   or the edge of the circle    overlooked
damn victim of the so called standard
    because my skin is covered
with the stories of battles gone
    because i'm picky who i surround myself with
and my lack of need in materialistic ways
    the fact that i see to the soul
and don't lose visibility on the protective layers outside
   So why am i tormented
     to be ignored by the one i want to love
She has to see it     in my eyes
   the yearn and submission feel so blatant
I feel betrayed    by my eyes
   Imprisoned
waiting     to be released from my enigmas
   to burn the shackles of slavery and let my love run free

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

SATURN
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 78
ok,us

1 posted 2006-01-27 12:26 PM

you are not alone in that feeling loved it good write.

p.s.
one day your love will run free just like a stallion.

~Hali~

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

2 posted 2006-01-31 10:06 AM

thank you :-) your comments are always kind

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

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