Dark Poetry #4 |
Ending |
click1 Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152usa |
Patching the holes, I never made, Saying the things, left unsaid. Putting to rest the demons, the fires, that burned so hot. Knowing I lived, giving what I got, forget what didn't count, moving on for now. Letting go, my pride, my anger, my frustration.. Fixing what I can, I find I'm fine. Knowing I did, my very best, leave history, to tell the rest. Life is offering, something new, I find it's not, all about you. Thanking God, for all I have, not regretting, what I never, really had. Love is, good, sure, and never sad. Cross the water, turn the page, thank the gods, I am saved! click "My fears come alive in this place where I once died" -godsmack- |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
couldn't have said it better. i love the way you put this and thank you for making me feel better. Annie |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
I like the style and meter you used for this... and, i agree, well spoken. Good write Peace "i said 'How bout a revelution' and he said 'Right' i said oh, you say ah, i say revelution and you say ja,That was the craziest game of poker" |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
this is great - very well penned. ~hugs~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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kitvb1 Junior Member
since 2006-01-23
Posts 28Trebgast, Germany |
hmmm, I don't know if I should feel better or worse. ????? but that's just me. A good write, TY. We've all been there. How we deal with it determines our paths. |
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rockbabe Member
since 2006-01-29
Posts 105 |
Very nice!! |
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