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Dark Poetry #4

I,m Down

shades of paul
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since 2005-12-14

Posts 370
In Reality

0 posted 2006-01-18 07:20 AM

Slipping on a slippery slope,
spiralling out of control,
down for the count,
free falling, ready to take the plunge,
heading for a crash on the decline,
I,m down
paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

1 posted 2006-01-18 01:44 PM

short and to the point. very well spoken emotion in so few words... enjoyed the read much

-mike

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

shades of paul
Member

since 2005-12-14

Posts 370
In Reality

2 posted 2006-01-19 08:04 AM

Thanks for the comments Mike............Paul

shades of peace,love,and happiness to you

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