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Your Wish Has Come True
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Your Wish Has Come True |
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tatalinia Member
since 2005-12-17
Posts 137CA, US 
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pacing back an forth you lose your composer in front of the people speechless with nothing to say to defend your broken heart that was split that day not sure what to do your soulmate faces you coming back to beg you partners after hurting you your mouth has gone dry not knowing what to do you stand there sad with tears coming down your eyes they tell you they missed you an want you back acting as if nothing went wrong when you were there puting things behind you to do what they cared giving up things you needed in order to show your love but in return you were burnt and stoned losing sleep cause you thought so much of them dissapointment was your reward in return the crowd screams for you to tell them where to jump but you stand there still in a slump so many tears shed for one being praying they would come back and save you come back home and be with you they return and now it angers you your wish has come true now what will you do? I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
What would I do? Close my eyes, turn around, and walk away. =GIS So what if my wings are too scratched, cut, and beat up to fly... I'll walk. |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
Wow... this is one of the first poems i've read in a while that hit directly home with something i was struggling with... This is a very good piece and the way it was written and the way it was worded i think gave it more of a feeling of compatability with the reader. Good post look forward to seeing more Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free |
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