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Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

0 posted 2003-11-05 06:26 PM

Why are the shards so eager to attach to my skin?
To make me bleed, then rub it in.
Red canvas,
I'm for sale.
Wet you palet.
Yes it lingers, long after dark.
I'll race you to the spot where the sun meets the stars.
We'll linger knee deep in the dew of this kiss.
Fragile, far beyond what you would expect.

Morning falls hard upon your eyes,
promoting a flicker,
tempting your foilage to catch flame.
But you turn your back and beg the moon for a second chance.

You looked in the mirror and I took a picture.
So I could know how you saw yourself.

Cotton canvas, gentle strokes.
Tommorow kisses yesterday in secret.
Today is born through sin.
But isn't everything...
Isn't everything broken?

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2003-11-05 10:01 PM

Wow. This is the first one I can absolutely say I love. It has attitude and desire of determination deep within. Im definitely adding this. Hell, I might even print it out!

All that is great once was small.

[Im the one thats going to die when its time for me to die. So let me live my life the way I want to.]-JIMI

mysticpoe
Senior Member

since 2003-02-28

Posts 883

2 posted 2003-11-06 08:15 AM

Why are the shards so eager to attach to my skin?
To make me bleed, then rub it in.
Red canvas,
I'm for sale. --- really liked these lines. Nice.

poe

If nothing is something
then everything is
our thoughts and feelings
and all that exists.

[This message has been edited by mysticpoe (11-07-2003 07:36 AM).]

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

3 posted 2003-11-07 06:02 AM

Sad, and Brilliant. =) gr8 job Lexy =)

- River

Love hurts as bad as it feels good.

eor
Senior Member

since 2002-09-26

Posts 959
blues & greys

4 posted 2003-11-07 07:22 PM

the first three lines really got my attention...nice write

"For those who understand you, no explanation is necessary. For those who don't, none is possible."

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-11-08 12:35 PM

yes, I suppose it is

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