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Cherishable_Baybee
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since 2006-01-04

Posts 57

0 posted 2006-01-04 07:39 PM

Twisted Paradise
By: Cherishable_Me

I dreamed about this place since
I was a child
Fantasies and fairytales
Run through my mind
My every own Disney world
At the back of my mind
Smiles and giggles
Laughter and joy
Were all apart of my past life
I blossom as beautiful young woman
Grown out of the fairytales and fantasies
Now fantasying one day out of this
Twisted Paradise
That is full of roses and daisies
And colored lollipops
Guarded by the metal steel bars
Unable to express any emotion or feelings
I have towards this twisted life I lead
Envied by all of this twisted life
But they do not see
That I am the one that envy’s them
For they do not see
What lies beneath?
This‘‘ so called paradise”

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2006-01-04 09:29 PM

CB~
WELCOME to PiP ... it is here that you will find comfort of the circle of friends~

Glad to have you join us~

Read, read, read ... for upon these pages blue, you will find inspiration that jumps into your inking well~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

2 posted 2006-01-06 02:45 AM

Hiya~
Love your first post and welcome to PiP, Enjoy!

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2006-01-06 08:10 AM

Welcome to Pip!!

I look forward to reading more of you.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Cherishable_Baybee
Member

since 2006-01-04

Posts 57

4 posted 2006-01-06 03:21 PM

Thanks im glad to join i hope to write more poems

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

5 posted 2006-01-17 11:14 AM

This was cool, it had a very unique idea behind it. i enjoyed this read alot. Excecllent post and welcome to PiP

Life is a torment and torment an enigma. So burn the shackles of slavery and let love run free
-i wrote it somewhere in time

sanozatsho
Junior Member

since 2006-01-26

Posts 14

6 posted 2006-01-31 12:31 PM

i will read this again to get its full meaning later but indeed i enjoy the truth. hows it from the other side eh? one wonders, i wanted this all my life and now that i have it, why do i feel cursed? indeed you have conveyed your feeling very well. the strucure was odd for me but the flow keep me going. a childs dream manifesting itself as an adults curse, such irony of life. almost like a o'connor short story.

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