Dark Poetry #4 |
dark and powerful |
darkrosexzx New Member
since 2005-12-27
Posts 4 |
In life as will as death in this world i call home forgiveness is lost love never existed and passion is forgotin and life no more matters grass no longer green flowers no longer beautiful im lost in something so dark and powerful |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
all is never lost if you let Him in Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Yeah, who yearns for a beautiful sky that does not exist? God bless. -GIS So what if my wings are too scratched, cut, and beat up to fly... I'll walk. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
dark & powerful indeed...felt your agony and lonliness, hope there is a light soon. ~hugs~ Tracie Love is the life of the soul... |
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ROBERTDAVIDSON New Member
since 2005-11-10
Posts 4 |
Powerfully written. Your personal despair is haunting and your dark loneliness comes through in every tragic line. Robert Davidson http://www.robertdavidson.blogsource.com |
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sanozatsho Junior Member
since 2006-01-26
Posts 14 |
i could feel the beginnings of a dark and powerful thing however i found there was a lack of detail. i keep reading becuas i was compeld to see what it was. perhaps i cannot see as far as i hoped. i do expect alot when i die. i expect as much from death as from life. though i have came to the conclusion i must live first before i can die. without this i rob myself of my death wish. |
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