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DejaEntendu
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since 2005-12-06
Posts 82
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2005-12-06 02:33 PM



I hope you know,
what you've done.
but after all this,
you're still the one.

the one who lied,
who made me cry,
who broke my spirit,
who made me die.

spoonfed lies,
year after year,
I wipe the tears,
off from my eyes.

it was all a hoax,
a senseless ploy,
I had been used,
I was your toy.

You never cared,
you never will,
but I'm still here,
so pass the bill.

Point your finger,
glare at me,
for you  will never,
be set free.

this guilt will rot,
your filthy mind,
a scratch in glass,
for all of time.

I'll pay the cost,
take the blame,
just once more,
you'll live in shame.

© Copyright 2005 G Rapp - All Rights Reserved
Annie78
Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469
here then there then back here
1 posted 2005-12-07 12:20 PM


you have captured exactly how i felt just a short time ago....and even tho i have moved on there is still a part of me that hopes his shame shows thru and rots him to the core. will never understand why people need to play games with anothers feelings, but i hope he falls for someone who shows him what it feels like to be lied to. thank you for this as it does say what i couldn't.
Annie

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx
2 posted 2005-12-07 05:12 AM


On a spiritual level, that's how Satan treated me, and his result will be the same.  Actually I pray he and the spirit of witchcraft both get at very minimum 1,000 years of personal excruciating pain in their future home, the Lake of Fire.  God bless.

Nice poem.

-GIS

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

Annie78
Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469
here then there then back here
3 posted 2005-12-07 06:16 AM


DejaEntendu, thank you for your reply to my post especially nice when you know that someone has taken the time to read something written awhile aqo. I wanted to welcome you, and tell you that i enjoyed reading your work. Can see many different meanings in this, just happened to go with the one that was most recent. Keep up the good work am sure i will be reading more of your posts.
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

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