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HAZMATTO
Junior Member

since 2005-11-24

Posts 14

0 posted 2005-11-26 06:43 AM

HEARTACHES ARE THE MASTERPIECE,
OF SOME FORGOTTEN AGE,
A SENSE OF SPIRIT DEEP INSIDE,
THAT NEVER TURNS THE PAGE.
THE LONLINESS INSIDE OF ME,
REMEMBRANCE OF THE PAST,
THIS TERROR GRIPS MY VERY SOUL,
THE DIE HAS NOW BEEN CAST.

A SEARCH FOR UNKNOWN VIRTUE,
UPON SOME HIGHER GROUND,
THE TRUTH WE FIND COMES FROM WITHIN,
AND RARELY EVER FOUND.
OUR LIFE IS BUT A TRAINING GROUND,
WE LEARN TO PASS THE TEST,
THE PATH OF LEAST RESISTANCE,
MUCH EASIER THAN THE REST.

THE TERMS OF LIFE ARE UNDECLARED,
EACH DAY REMAINS ANEW,
MY CONCEPT OF EXISTANCE,
DEFINES THE WAY I CHOOSE.
THE TRUTH IS AN ENIGMA,
AND RIGHTEOUSNESS SUBLIME,
OUR RULES AND REGULATIONS,
DESCENDED OUT OF TIME.

THIS BATTLE WILL CONTINUE,
THE WAR IS NEVER WON,
LIVING IN REFLECTIONS,
OF PAST EXPERIENCE, GONE.
BRACING NEW ENCOUNTERS,
BOLDLY IN THE BLIND,
TAKING ON THIS THING CALLED LIFE,
ONLY SEEKING PEACE OF MIND.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2005-11-26 10:48 AM

Welcome to Passions, we hope you enjoy your time here, please check your email for a special greeting

Greeneyes~

~~**~~
There are moments when speech
is but a mouth pressed lightly and
humbly against the angel's hands
~~**~~

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

2 posted 2005-11-26 11:32 AM

Welcome to PiP. Excellent first post

"i said 'How bout a revelution' and he said 'Right' i said oh, you say ah, i say revelution and you say ja,That was the craziest game of poker"
Oar

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2005-11-28 03:45 AM

Seeking peace of mind in or for what you see in the reflection. What is actually in the reflection? He refines like a silver smith refines silver. Until he sees his reflection in it. God bless.

-GIS

Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit.

HAZMATTO
Junior Member

since 2005-11-24

Posts 14

4 posted 2005-11-29 09:00 AM

G I S THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS. THE REFLECTIONS ARE NOT SOMETHING YOU SEE, BUT SOMETHING THAT YOU FEEL. I TRIED TO BASE THE CONTEXT OF THIS POEM ON EMOTIONAL HEALING AND WELL BEING.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2005-11-29 12:26 PM

Welcome to PiP~

You have some really nice thoughts in this penning, however, the ALL CAPS are so distracting and difficult to read that they distract from the actual poetry itself~

I've seen several of your writings sprinkled throughout the forums, but with the ALL CAPS formatting, I don't think I can get through them~ Just too hard on the eyes ... and my brain doesn't seem to process that style of writing so well~

You've got some great poetic material to present ... how's about giving the suggestions a try and ditching those CAPS ?

Again, please feel welcomed here~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

Email - [email protected]

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

6 posted 2005-11-29 09:13 PM

HAZMATTO, Welcome to PIPs. Enjoyed your post.Come back often, martyjo

Annie78
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 469
here then there then back here

7 posted 2005-12-13 11:32 AM

welcome to PIP....i really enjoyed this and will be reading more from you i hope.
Annie

there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles

Dadtoudi
New Member

since 2005-12-13

Posts 5

8 posted 2005-12-13 01:25 PM

Hi,

A very good poem - reflection is such a funny thing...you never see/feel exactly the same thing twice, but you can indeed reflect on it so many times,

Thank you for sharing.

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