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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Time, tick of spinning law Dirty hour, minute raw My wooden box super hero I believe it Screaming kids, parents, world in chaos Downward slide with no control Find a fine pin point stop Craig is raw rock under magnified light Dead wheat grass all around I'm a rock that rises And rise I will Under God in time --------------------------------------- Yeah, I don't think any of my poems have originated on a computer or notebook paper lately, and this one is ironically late to be posted. Yeah, who needs a computer or notebook paper when you can use things like a torn McDonalds bag, or a free issue of newspaper/magazine. I shouldn't have written this part... Now I'm going to go puke, but please don't erase it Mr. or Miss. Moderator. Umm, God bless! Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit. |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
i like this piece, i don't really think i've read anything like this recently, i loved the imagery and the word choice, nice write "Do not go gentle into that good night, |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank Him, its pretty cool. -GIS Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit. |
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