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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Are you? Can you feel? The darkness all around you Hardstone within you Bright bright light Slip now awake Gain consciousness From a string of truth A work spoken freely spoken Come alive and sew the loose ends Give this to God Untie the knot Find the truth Needle work together Hold by a thread Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
Let me be the first to reply. this is a good poem and I like how you take a simple objective and use it to symbolize the thought your trying to express I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank Him. -GIS Praise the eternal reign, the Father; Jesus Christ; and the Holy Spirit. |
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