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behind the brick wall |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
absence of the mind collors can't even seem to mingle, they sway to the brick walls no way out/ nothingness felt all over my body as if there radiates a reflection of once was there. Feeling something running, oozing from my arms yet I stand with no disregard, doe anyone else even notice the palenss of my skin, no sounds coming from the hollow body just swaying toward the brick wall trying to find the door that disappeared, I hear a very small sound behind the wall maybe trying to save me from myself, but how will I know with not a window in place to see. I began clawing at the wall hopeful for my redemption, yet all I hear is the wind. sadly I wimper to sleep to dream of the girl who loved life, now longing to wake up to feel the nothingness, the warmth it covers her with. |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
A very Unique very and style you use here and it works very well. I enjoyed the read very much and hope to see more. On a side note watch spelling and puncuation I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
thx Jeremiah,sometimes my fingers get ahead of me. |
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Kaos Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 317between space and time |
Ditto on the unique style, thanks for the read "Do not go gentle into that good night, |
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