Dark Poetry #4 |
fire eyes |
EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
unfortunately, you won't see it coming; if he has fire eyes and a cold heart, it adds up to a game where your loss is real... and painful... thrust in a closet where mercy dares not go... oh, you'll give, and he'll take, and then he'll bend you until you break into... nothing left. he'll even turn others against you; those you thought would dance around the pit for you, shun instead... because he's that good, and his fire eyes entrance with attraction and, yes!.. with rage hidden under the facade of love. but deep within those fire eyes, sits a man you know and have seen before, shrouded by misery... playing a game where his loss will be real, and painful... even more so than yours. of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Eve~ This is a stirring penning~ Drew me in ... and held me~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Its talking about a strong love, maybe. -GIS Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
This is definitely about love... lol. Maybe in more of a Mexican-Catholic style. Whats really in the heart above all. -GIS Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Gah. Mike. You use the english language to your advantage don't you? Truth and fire. Courts. Hollow. Come on God, do I seem bulletproof? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
God, this has a lot in here, amazing write. I saw such a powerplay here and it can be seen from both sides, too. The side of the one doing the hurt and the hurting. |
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