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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Hard it seems to fall away The lights have gone To play his simple solitude Shadows shine his heavy brow And under the sky His body glows. His eyes are lucid, fire rips Broken skin He can hear nothing He tells himself Lights liken to his mind, He glows, Everything it’s ok now, He glows. Come on God, do I seem bulletproof? |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I had to read a few times to get it. I guess when you wrote it you were thinking on levels that flipped to totally different themes with the same idea so it made what you wrote sound like a far pull here and then another far pull there and they connect so perfectly that you have to really pay attention. Nice write. I loved it. -GIS Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
"walk towards the light..." "do not go into the light..." "all are welcome, all are welcome..." it's so gosh darn confusing sometimes!!!!! this was awesome, though. sometimes they shine to make you wonder what they've got. made me reminisce... love ya courts. of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
the ending was sooooo good this was awesome espesh the firts few lines of second stanza can you find me space inside your bleeding heart? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I am way out here, I saw a couple of things: I saw depression, armegeddon, addiction and release. |
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