Dark Poetry #4 |
Locked Waterfall |
green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Its always rushing over me Silent screams Memories, tremors, punishment for nothing I've done I want escape sigh Retarded chaos impaired reality Look up for the remote control Just to push a button And a piece of me falls In the couch But thats right I'm not on the couch And the water is still falling Where does it come from I find myself. Starring abscent minded Not comprehending ...(ignorant)... Stench of alcohol Pride about who I was Or am Or will be Forgetting whats more important than my ego Where I'm supposed to be Have honor And please take Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
I love it. Haven't read you for so long. A perfect welcome back if there ever was one. Don't you think waterfalls...are...I don't know, constant. Peaceful, powerful even. This poem conjured images like a magician and a rabbit. Thanks. Hollow. Courts. Come on God, do I seem bulletproof? |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
"punishment for nothing i've done..." i remember ethan hawke singing this tune in "reality bites"... "i'm nothin'... that's me". you've gone and gotten too good. mikey of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you guys. Hollow- Yeah waterfalls are especially constant if its the river of God flowing to the low places, even if ones confused. Eve- Thank you. I'm not exactly sure who ethan hawke is. I'm not really against t.v. ,but I don't watch it too often. Maybe I should. Thank you. -GIS Romans 8:28 "And we know that God causes everything to work together for the good of those who love God and are called according to his purposes |
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