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For all my pain
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For all my pain |
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spaz02 Member
since 2005-06-28
Posts 74USA |
"For All My Pain" Here is for all my pain; written in vain Blood for my ink; I'll never look back Wicked are my thoughts; very impure Positive not; negative sure I am lost; in the deepest pit of hell Sleeping in the nothingness; scared of my fate Darkness of misery; dreams are nightmares Scared of myself; scared of the past I can't look back; I never will Don't force me to look; I just might fail This is my pain; in which I will dwell Tears forever burn; the hall of shame is full Times ticking quick; I must do this fast Help myself; and fool you all If I fail to pass this test please forgive me; I can't hack this life anymore "For every drop of my blood that falls is because of you" ~Spaz02~ |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I think I like you as a person too. It seems jazzy. I'm more of a rock myself, but yeah, it fits the "dark" criteria of this forum. It sounds like a steady dose of crap and then giving up with a sympathetic outro. Nice write. -GIS |
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Musicmaker1969 
since 2000-06-25
Posts 589Peterborough, Ontario Canada |
I can COMPLETELY relate to this poem. It is what I am going through right now dealing with over 20 years of sexual abuse by both men and women, friends, family and strangers. I relate to your pain and pray God heals you completely and that you are set free to fly like you should be able to do. Bless you. Sheri Jesus lives in my heart! He can in yours too!!! |
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