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Dark Poetry #4

born dead

Xeonox

Senior Member

since 2000-04-01

Posts 1764
CA, USA

0 posted 2005-06-25 08:22 PM

When I was little a kid,
I was not at all shady,
Sure, I did my stuff,
But I wasn’t rough,

Each slap I took,
Felt my mind quake,
Scars of the past,
Can be seen today,

Daddy wasn’t around,
Did he want to be?
Guess I’ll never know,
He found another hoe,

This may sound harsh,
But that’s what this is,
Anger in few lines,
No punches through the wall,

Just another misplaced mind,
Mistook me for a wrong seed,
Had to pay the due,
Being born was my crime,
Who knew?

I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality.

WhiteRose
Member Elite

since 2002-07-23

Posts 3208
somebody's dungeon

1 posted 2005-07-01 06:50 PM

Very well written. Nicely done.

"fit to be tied"

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2005-07-02 04:28 PM

I have three daddies. And one of them says He'll be a father to the fatherless. Nice write.

-GIS

Thr enemies name is Satan a.k.a. "The Stupid Angel"

spaz02
Member

since 2005-06-28

Posts 74
USA

3 posted 2005-07-03 11:07 PM

this was nice...alotta emotion i dont understand though

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