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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving 
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Stab wounds naked trees vacant sky Heresy where pavement lies path betrayed fate, hate, relate to exist in appalling passing state of mind to allow myself to be denied dignity for love. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dawn~ 'to allow myself to be denied dignity for love.' This thought will squeeze the hearts of many~ A thought-provoking write, poetess~ Your new photo is LOVELY~ Nice to see you~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile... it's going to be difficult for you to hide in the dark if you keep sending up flares.  awesome you |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thats awesome you put this in the "dark" forums. That rocks. -GIS Satan a.k.a. The Stupid Angel |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smile it's okay I never felt welcome here after mikie left anyhow.  Know I read you anyway. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I was going to ask but I think not now..  Just know that I found you, read you and miss you.loved this piece too! "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
yanno? i miss you too ..... m "we all have wings, but some of us don't know why" |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
thank you ladies for visiting my little bitty contribution...very nice to see you been missing all of you... and Maria, especially |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
dig..dign..dignity.. um one look at my current pic says i lost mine quite awhile ago. nice to see you peek in |
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tonyc New Member
since 2005-06-25
Posts 5TN |
Stab wounds, what a great first line. TonyC |
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Triskaidekaphobia Member
since 2003-02-05
Posts 251In a state of disrepair... |
An amazing flow to your words that carried me through the piece. I know what I like and I like what I see, or so it seems ,to me. One of the best I've ever read in this forum. I look foward to seeing more from you. "And the sun went down, and the stars came out far over the summer sea, |
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