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Dark Poetry #4

well wishes

EveGnosis
Member

since 2002-02-21

Posts 300
New York, USA

0 posted 2005-05-30 03:17 PM

note: this was in response to one of greeny's writes, but it hit me so hard i felt compelled to make it its own poem.
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i feel like the "rusty coin butterfly"
in the bottom of the well...
seeing the light way up there above,
and longing for it,
yet feeling so weak...
can i dare climb?

of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

1 posted 2005-05-30 03:45 PM

Sure you can.

Loved it heaps Mike, short but so....amazing. Yay!
Hollow.
Courtney.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

2 posted 2005-05-30 11:43 PM

This is a really cool poem. Cause it makes you think and leaves you sorta hanging to continue with imagination.

-GIS

Satan a.k.a. The Stupid Angel

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

3 posted 2005-07-05 07:48 PM

Can I dare climb? That is a very good question.

-GIS

Thr enemies name is Satan a.k.a. "The Stupid Angel"

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