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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida 
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The days are running longer. Curtains contain the darkness that shrouds my mood. Keeping me from stumbling from my bed of helpless despair. The moon is a traitor of light that can’t fool me into believing that anything good lasts, that loyalty means something, and it doesn’t hurt to be betrayed. It’s a mood I am sure. But it’s clinging to me with a fierceness that won’t belie the feeling that it’s all rolling downhill and I can’t catch up. Could be that I have crossed the line into crazed thoughts and insane ideas. Does it matter? It all has the same results. Me here. Everyone else way over there, except the ones like me. It’s just a mood I am sure. But it feels like heaviness that won’t go away. I’ve been wishing for tomorrow every day this week. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"I’ve been wishing for tomorrow every day this week." Gosh... this has to be thought around the world by so many people...including me Wonderful read Susan |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
is the moood clinging to you, or you to it? and if that mood doesn't change, is tomorrow just another browken promise? thought provoking write, susan. we are what we seek |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I can relate. Good poem. -GIS Satan a.k.a. The Stupid Angel |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
argh |
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TexUS Member
since 2003-03-20
Posts 228 |
I know these moods. Well written, thanks. |
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