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shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20
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0 posted 2008-01-22 06:04 PM


She appeared to me once
In my dreams
She seemed to be
My everything

She brings to me
What only some can see
What she brings
Is my reality

She's my angel
Of sorrow and pain
The only feelings
She feels in vain

Beneath her tears
I hear her cry
Crumpling to the ground
She had her wish

And died

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Treagal
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since 2008-01-08
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1 posted 2008-01-22 08:09 PM


I really enjoyed reading this, for me it meant the failings of wishing for something unattainable.

"If wishes were horses, beggars would ride"

shattered-smiles
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since 2008-01-20
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2 posted 2008-01-22 08:49 PM


That's exactly what I was getting at.  It's like there's something out there that you need to reach, it's only that you can't get it.  Thanx for the comment Treagal.
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