Dark Poetry #4 |
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Soul Sepulchre Junior Member
since 2003-10-19
Posts 29Tennessee, USA |
((Unfortunately, I cannot remember if I had posted this one before or not. If I have, I apologize for the re-post. If not, then this is another one of my older poems, much as "Wander" and "One Hope", but I pray that you'll enjoy it all the same.)) The inner dwellings of space persist Taking shape, bending, swirling Blackholes pull you in, hugging you close While supernovas blast you away, keeping you warm. The sun flickers against the backdrop of stars It appears as an ember lit and dying Slowly, surely, it teaches us a lesson Oh, how even something so powerful can fade. Each galaxy spirals, cold, desolant So alone, but teeming with radiance How many forms do we seek Among the gods and the Heavens? Nay, the moon casts not its shadow Drawing across the tides of Earth's night sky It creeps, blanketing us with its black cloak of white twilight Peering down at us as an everlasting eye. The tides pull and push, crashing against the rocks Crags form, and crags fade, littering the soft earth with ocean Ocean that sprays up to the sky, and trickles down like fingers Fingers of God that are tickling the mother, Gaia. And lo', there stand we humans, bold and proud Our eyes peer, and seek, but do not see We are bound to the mortal coil of this planet And we are glorious and honored by her. We reach out and touch her, but do not feel We listen to her words, but do not hear Oh the many things she has to say Life will go on, she whispers in our ears. The inner dwellings of space persist And mother earth spins complacently Silently, firmly, dashing through the cosmos And we stand firm, watching her go. Watching her go, go, go so quick Straight down to her very core Oh that core that layers her soul And beats in one with our hearts. Jeremy - |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Wow! yeah its all there alright and were smacked right into the center of it. GIS a trickle of music from a well |
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symphony_of_thoughts Member
since 2003-08-03
Posts 95Somewhere |
This is a very good write. True, the universe surely is quite vast. |
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*Inque Monroe* Junior Member
since 2003-10-18
Posts 43No where special |
Extremely good, one of your best. |
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