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What You Did To Me |
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KuruShio Member
since 2003-11-18
Posts 110
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A Corpse Without You To many masks for a form I knew. Something behind the face, I thought was you. But everyone is a lie, just like you, even I. Its just a question, of who will you be today? You won't know me when I pass you by, Because I'll be hiding behind my own lie. Wear my heart on your sleeve, you can, Its not like this body needs it now. Still red the gore on your hands, That tore my soul from inside of me. Still grinning the face that shames, A name that no longer applys to me. This shadow of a man that I am. I am a broken shadow of a man. Neither night nor day can give me purchase only purged dust on earth can avenge the worthless. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I've read quite a few from you and I think I've found your personality. Like I've found you as who you are. I think in pictures, so here it goes: You are the outside surface of a round light blue balloon, and there's a thin black string that goes diagonally across the whole view. The balloon is vertical center, horizontal right. To its left is another balloon like thing that is red and I see a rubber duck on the bottom on the left. and above the ballon shap figures in the middle kinda at the top is like a thick black hollow pyramid shape standing out from a DARK grayish brown. And there are bits of neon yellowgreen short slightly curved lines here and there. Cheetoes (the chips). I see one more thing its a downward slope facing the viewer, the end of an irregular shaped rectangular prism that is a soft yet dark light brown heavy marroon color, like it was a candle and its laying on its side like its slipping in structure and gonna fall apart, but it hasn't yet. Yeah, thus far... You're not a bad person. Probably pretty cool and dissatisfied. -GIS John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I forgot to add "KuruShio" to the picture, and actually I believe the picture would have some more details to be more accurate. -GIS John 12:25 He that loveth his life shall lose it; and he that hateth his life in this world shall keep it unto life eternal. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
To many masks for a form I knew. Something behind the face, I thought was you. But everyone is a lie, just like you, even I. Its just a question, of who will you be today? Wow, Im left speechless, but i love those lines the most... "Trina" Laughter Is The Enemy Of Desire, But Desire Itself Is Painful, After You Get That Which You Desire, What's Next? |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
and through this (writing) you will perservere . . . I see no shadow . . . |
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