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silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2005-02-26 11:29 PM

you're wrong
and i hate that about you
because now i know for once
you are not perfect
you aren't who i want
and you lie
and i hate that more
because what you say
sounds so much better
than the truth
and you laugh
and it eats me up inside
because what you're laughing about
is just so pathetic
and its me
and you cry
and i wish you wouldn't
because it makes me want to comfort you
let you borrow my warmth
to make you all okay
and you love
and it kills me
because its not me
in your arms all day
not me tucked away in your mind
not me holding your hand
and you're wrong
and i hate it that you don't see
because you've never been more mislead
and you can't know
just how wrong you are
about me

can you find me space inside your bleeding heart?

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

1 posted 2005-02-27 11:21 PM

sad.... very sad

and angry too

its good dude, but maybe not ur best.... sry if thats mean of me

l&e

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

silhouetted
Senior Member

since 2004-01-30

Posts 537
New Zealand

2 posted 2005-02-27 11:26 PM

yea didnt like it either

can you find me space inside your bleeding heart?

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

3 posted 2005-02-28 12:04 PM

This actually really apealed to my emotions right now. I like it muchly.

Hollow_Emptiness
Senior Member

since 2004-02-01

Posts 715
New Zealand

4 posted 2005-02-28 10:08 PM

Alot of feeling in that one. Oh love. Just thinking of your drama thing. Lol. Hehe. Lol. I liked it. Save.

Hollow.
Courtney.

Come on God, do I seem bulletproof?

River
Senior Member

since 2003-09-16

Posts 627
my own little world

5 posted 2005-03-02 12:08 PM

eh? i think there are so many people this could be about! in that sense it's quite generic...but yet it's good! harsh... i like that. could i suggest taking out the And words? you might have put that in for effect, but to me it just takes away if you know what i mean. lol. anyways, again, i still like were you're going with this.

- River

How can I stand here and not be moved by you? - Lifehouse

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

6 posted 2005-03-09 02:15 AM

I Can Relate To This, On Different Levels, The Emotions, Pain, And Sadness, Is What Makes It Great.

"Trina"

Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy...

Much Luv,
"Trina"

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