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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Your eyes twinkling far away Musing by what you receive Someone else You are someone else Someone else that isn't me... A great teacher An awesome soul With a twin characteristic And musically sound Slipping here to offer you some Sign off to give to you Something new I give this to you Please take my gift to you Its not a book Its not my art Its something new From me for you Watch it die That breath of death The breath that brought death to death Death of death over you Watch it die You give to me So freely Life without its misery As for death, lets watch it die, And then lets just be free Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God. |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
"you are someone else... someone else that isn't me"... or even mine, eh? i feel this to be about a friend far aloft on west coast ocean breezes, but i couldn't help but be reminded of an east coast friend... dammuhnit...i should've said wind and it'd made for a cool poem. once again, love your words of insight. always, mike of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I think I'm working on it, but I'm trying to think more of others than myself. I'm not quite satisfied with this one, but thank you nonetheless. And yeah it very well could have made a poem. The west coast or the east with a yeah,... blah nevermind. Thanks. -GIS Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
I was lost somehwere between Mike's reply and your reply to his reply. But to the poem, it was cool. If I'm honest, I didn't like it as much as your others...but then your poems are always so good. Saved. Hollow. Courts. Come on God, do I seem bulletproof? |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I'm trying to pratice this self-control thing, and feel like maybe I should wait til tomorrow to respond to your response, but you are on right now... ... Yeah, thank you. I was going to come up with a poem in response to Mike's response, but I gave up, rather quickly for some reason. Thank you Courts. -GIS Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God. |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
This is a modest poem of self appraisal. Only God could've inspired this, and yet left the writer oblivious to the fact that it was the writer the writer was writing about. No, I'm not Dr. Seuss...lol. Great write, Craig, and so much on the mark for who you are as opposed to whomever you may have written it for. God bless! Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Wow, I really didn't plan on getting online again, but I've got an idea thats pretty much like "what the...?" and it won't leave me alone. So I'm here to kill it. But as for you Chris, thank you. The Dr. Sues (not sure how to spell it and for some reason I'm going to opt not to highlight, copy, back arrow at the top, and then after I look forward and paste. I'm just going to leave it like that. Thank you again Chris. I should title this response "Drunk" for I keep rambling like a drunk and the fact that this response is going to be archived for an undetermined amount of time makes me wonder what in the world I keep typing for, but yeah Chris, thank you. I hadn't looked it from that perspective yet, and that is rather interesting and, you're right, its pretty cool. Like a sneak up behind and pounce on you blessing. I think I've said enough, and more than likely too much. So thank you again. -GIS Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God. |
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