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The Great Divide |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Truth in divinity is a mystery Behind a curtain of black The doors of Heaven have a key Through the heart Born into this workd and whatever walk of life A path of constant power and perfect field of you Grow, you grow, its constant too And your soul scrapes through time in its vessel Say what you will in life, judge yourself You decide your own theory or theories The Book tells you all... so why should I? Statues of Mathew, Mark, Luke, and John never move Stone doesn't bend, but may slip Can you feel the power No gimicks, no games The truth thats real and unwritable (Are you expecting tomorrow?) This same question from... Blood that fell to a quill An entire lifetime for one decision, then no more... Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God. |
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tecoyah Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 83NY |
I found this an interesting walk through the Christian mindset. Well worded and an excellent use of visuals. The last line leaves one pondering.....which is how a deep poem should end. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you tecoyah, I am a Christian. I was actually hoping someone would see this. It isn't really about a mass of replies, more a point to be made, and I see you got it. Which gives me a sense of satisfaction, so thank you. -GIS Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God. |
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