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Thumping Flesh
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Thumping Flesh |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
A light gray with a little pink Thud in frantic hopes Despair and beeps Are you breathing Almost like being raped by the second hand Tick, hopes, dreams, love, and hurt Very afraid, are you afraid The words of a modern poet's depiction These words, the feelings in these words Horrified, acceptance, denial, surprise Skin and bone near the time of rot The "here and now" that catches up Exhale, faster This is your last breath And I want it to go away Out of your body Sleep, now That freezing temperature on your body Still and stop... Quiet in death? Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God. |
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tecoyah Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 83NY |
Well done....gives the sense of finality, yet leaves open the true intent of the meaning. I enjoyed this. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you tecoyah, I appreciate that. -GIS Corruption is caused by holes in obedience to God. |
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