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kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

0 posted 2004-12-15 10:14 PM

**tormented lies**

Liars and cheaters all around.
she creeps out,
trying hard not to make a sound.
But someone hears & stops her,
and throught their lying eyes they leer,
causing even more to fear.
No one to trust,
all freinds beyond redemtion,
yet once again she makes an exception,
after all of tehir deception.
Never unable to forgive,
Never able to put her fut down,
never letting herself live,
she will always forgive.
This is her biggest fault
though said to be the best.
The wounds filled with salt,
but still she follows all the rest.
They stab her in the back.
They lie straight to her face.
But when confronted
this just isnt the case.
"It wasnt her"
"she didnt mean to"
they've even got her lying to herself.

~Karissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

1 posted 2004-12-16 03:13 AM

Thats kinda how witchcraft was for me. You start "remembering" past lives, fearing the look of an owl, and all the others say what your parents told you a long time ago they would say. Until you think you have some mighty power. Then you might realize that your locking yourself away one brick at a time, or you might not. Just made me think.

-GIS

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2004-12-16 05:42 AM

nicely written, check for spelling errors though

M

darkness_witch
Senior Member

since 2003-12-03

Posts 516
Underneath

3 posted 2004-12-16 05:36 PM

nice work

hehe its good to read one of your poems again, its been awhile huh
yeah just check for spelling errors dude

loved the ending heaps, awesome

love and empathy
sophie

nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world.

kissa~rachelle
Senior Member

since 2003-11-27

Posts 988
nowhere special

4 posted 2004-12-17 07:19 PM

thnx..sorry about the spelling..i wrote this on here when i was extrememly tired..so yeah. Sorry about that, and im glad you liked it. Thanks.

Karissa

I ask why, but in my mind,
I find i cant really rely on myself.
~~~Linkin Park~~~

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