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taking turns |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
Everybody stops caring When I'm fading in and out Everybody glances past me When the tears stop and I begin again Nobody notices me When I start smiling again They all start thinking I've got what I need They start believeing I don’t need them When I start trying to live again They get sick of me And my screwed up world They get sick of my silly little problems And they get sick of helping me So my world starts to fade again And I fall further And stare looking back at all of them The people I thought would help me And I stare as they squirm Nervously, wondering who will give me their hand this time Whos turn is it? nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
(edited-profanity-Ladycat) i've been waiting for one like this. so damn good. soph what a talent you have, to convert how ur feeling into something as beautiful as that. maybe its cuz im listening to hello... or maybe its both ur poem and the song, but gawd dude im sad, tears forming... bloody hell ur great. love you always, and im here for you next time ur in one of ur upset moments, u can ring me, u really can. you cry, i cry. love you! LOR you're the only one keeping me alive [This message has been edited by Ladycat (12-15-2004 03:58 PM).] |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
"You’re too important for anyone There’s something wrong with everything you see But I, I know who you really are You’re the one who cries when you’re alone" "I’m so sick of speaking words that no one understands Is it clear enough that you can’t live your whole life all alone I realize you’re afraid But you can’t reject the whole world You can’t escape You won’t escape You can’t escape You don’t want to escape" This is going to make for a long reply...isn't it? Well I don't care. Because sometimes filling up space makes it easier. Haha, look at me, trying to be profound at metaphorical. Yeah, I'm talking about that void, where you wake in the morning and you step outside and you take a deep breath and you get real high and you scream at the top of your lungs, what's going on? (What's Up - 4 Non Blondes). Maybe someone won't always be there to reach down and pull you back up, but I'm sure I'll always meet you when you hit the bottom. "And I love you." - River Phoenix. Running on Empty. Love always, Just simple ole Courtney. You just got to see me through another day |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
.....so good. and dude, i'm always willing for it to be my turn. whenever you need a hand, i'll make it my turn to be there. hell, i'll even cut in line! lots of love, Kurst xox Pride is holding your head up, when everyone else has their's lowered. Courage is what makes you do it. |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
thanks dudettes. you three rock my world, along with a selected other two. i love you all so much, and I'm sorry i feel how I said I did in the poem. thanks for reading, its good to know if i post something at least you three will read love and empathy always (dont forget it) sophie nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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A Tone of Voice Member
since 2001-07-18
Posts 287 |
sometimes we need to spill our guts to allow ourselves the space, to continue breathing--- you do good gut spilling....hang in there! *smile* |
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kissa~rachelle Senior Member
since 2003-11-27
Posts 988nowhere special |
awesome write. Not your best..only because you have so many others that are...I know how it feels...on both sides... Karissa I ask why, but in my mind, |
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