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"yes" |
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PainBaneChaos Member
since 2003-10-17
Posts 150The point of no return |
Tear-streaked face, Mascara running. A concerned glance here and there, Stinking with pretense. With a smile, “Felling better?” Every part of my mind, Every last bit of life I once though I controlled, Wanted to scream “No.” With every last ounce of breath, Spill to someone, Vent my frustration. Cry to someone, Who gives a damn, Who understands. “Yes.” *more angst-witch than dark, but it's my trend as of late.* |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Yes, like an exasperated sigh. Tension until the ultimate explosion whether in a percievable manner or in a baffling and uncomprehendable way that would leave you more confused than the blow itself. Thats cool. I like it. -GIS let God ROAR,... in power... |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
nice very nice not much more i can say but very powerful and great love and empathy sophie nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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