Dark Poetry #4 |
Mercy |
~K~ Member
since 2004-07-27
Posts 148 |
she claws a dirt clogged messeage into a silent surface a shadow passes over the symbolic gesture the monster rises unaware of it's unholy conjuration moments pass with a heightened sense of what should be and what should be released from misery |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
i'm never able to quite conjure up a response proper, ~k~. mercy i beg.english lax with words great enough to convey, so just one word: beautiful. of all the things we try to find... it's only love we keep. |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
stunning ending. powerful poem perfect nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
sometimes we are all too selfish to show mercy... and sometimes, just too damned ignorant ..often, you just need to be blatant to recieve mercy... |
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