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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
You're ice cold words wrap tight Around my throat. Rattling my bones like bitter August wind. The sinking depths of your unwavering stare. Your injured soul Crippling me in the heat of battle. How I wish I could wipe clean the dirt That makes you feel the way You do. Lift the fake happiness you and I Are so bound to. But I'll never have you, You'd never want me. Without you, How is happiness ever even barely Obtainable? "I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson [This message has been edited by vampiana (11-06-2004 12:13 AM).] |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
For crying out loud...LITERALLY!! Dammit, Vamp ~ you gotta stop writing such depressingly AWESOME poetry. You're gonna bring the world down, and make the world so frigging happy you did with powerfully sad writes like these. (Trust me, it's all meant to praise you for this one). "And now I find the future's gone, the reasons that I had to carry on... Are gone... I cried for it all, You never heard me call...at all..." (Still stuck on the dot dot dot thingy... maybe I should start concentrating on the semicolon...that'd make a great t-shirt...black with nothing but a big white semicolon on it... The story of my life...) Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
I have an idea I might know what the guts of this one are about. And I agree with Purity. This is a good piece. Sigh.. awe. -GIS God blesses. |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
oh geez... i feel like singing... "there's a chance you will be there...i'd like to know the truth. i'll find it out somehow...the chances aren't too strong" oooff. ooouch. oooover it. singing for you, vampiana. you rule. i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
Woah...very dark poem. You got talent, i luv your poems!  ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
despite the name steal... nah jokes lol CALM DOWN it was so awesome! I LOVED IT! wow, overwhelmed. TOO GOOD LOR put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Dark and Beautiful... Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy... |
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