Dark Poetry #4 |
If I Pray Hard Enough |
Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
If I pray hard enough, can you be there for me? I'll find it out somehow; the chance is there or not. Maybe the chance is strong... I've been strong enough alone. But if you'd help me learn of love then the chances that I've missed... Are good enough to mend this heart you've proved can bend... If I pray hard enough.... Are those chances my friend? If I pray hard enough, will my wonders prove you true? Can you come to accept me when others cut right through? And what if we can be? Can we be alone? Do the words we speak in silence Truly stand out on their own? I think we've tried too long, and the world tells us we're wrong. If I pray hard enough, are the chances still all gone????? Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere [This message has been edited by Purity (10-31-2004 02:47 AM).] |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
i had forgotten where i put my tissues. the wonderful thing about chances is that they are wonderful when you are willing to take them. and i believe that when you take a chance, and you pray hard enough, that which you seek will be given unto you. but, are you willing to chance that you believe this enough to take the chance to make it true? you better, or i'll have to kick your... chances, i guess. this was beautiful, carrigan. i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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News_From_Nowhere Member
since 2002-06-14
Posts 173CU, NY |
I'm trying hard to believe & will it to be so But after all is said and done those chances hurt, ya know? Purity, your name says it all, and I am here with you in your wait of chances. They say it's 50/50 but my heart says odds aren't fun to play with. Loved the wording in this one. "So give life to your dreams, for there lies your survival, and cast your heart beyond those faded scenes, and I'll bring you through the storm" |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
cool poem soz tired might repost a better reply hollow courtney |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
WOW... Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy... |
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