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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Build from nowhere Set my place of glory Imagine it fall apart Sticky things Things with a patch Dizzy I'm relaxed Everything exploded Landing where it will There it landed to grow again God blesses. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
I like it. but it seems lacking. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Yeah I agree, it does seem a little incomplete. Do you think it being somewhat incomplete adds to the title of it being Debris? This is an honest question. If it does why, if not why not? -GIS God blesses. |
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