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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Where am I And still with low confidence Confederate swords from my heart Confused even me I can almost see plainly The things they don't mention I'm only trying to live But I'm pressing to hard Squeezing myself into something else Holding on to promises Reading the manuscript all wrong And I'd walk into a bullet The bullet wouldn't hurt Even if I died I'd laugh and smile even Course after it went numb But where am I I have this constant bubble behind my throat And it just won't come out It sits there I'm looking at the world around me And its so scary The majority of it hates me I'll just have to ride it out on love God blesses. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
=) I know what this means!!! ha ha...this is what you were talking about earlier, nice job...anyways...blah blah blah. groovy poem. =) - Bon "Stained by the sun, I can see colors...colors of mercy washing over me." - 3 Minutes From Home |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Yeah, I guess I talk about what I write about. I guess I think about things quite a bit too. Thanks, -GIS God blesses. |
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Lexy Senior Member
since 2003-01-28
Posts 1038California |
I like this a lot. I know exactly how you feel. at least what you described in this poem. |
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click1 Member
since 2003-03-25
Posts 152usa |
Nice...I like the flow and how it put a picture in my head. thanx! Click |
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EveGnosis Member
since 2002-02-21
Posts 300New York, USA |
a most interesting piece, green. implications abound. i like. i'll always need a friend, one i can defend. |
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green_itchy_stuff Senior Member
since 2003-06-26
Posts 1929New Caney, Tx |
Thank you. Its nice to know I'm not blind alone. (Misery loves company. lol.) -GIS God blesses. |
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