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Dark Poetry #4

In the Ceiling Groove

symphony_of_thoughts
Member

since 2003-08-03

Posts 95
Somewhere

0 posted 2004-10-29 10:54 PM

This one and only night
That repeats for none to see
Is what I've come to believe
Is what I've built myself upon

In quiet desperation
Short from the bottom
I can live fine
Tuning out what I might have
What I could have, what I should

I'm ok, I've learned
I'm ok, this is what I am
The heady head that talks from the corner
And when the breeze comes, they'll all
Lift ground and bounce on the spaces

But all but me
And all but me

Well, I'm perfectly fine
I'll just sit here
I can see everything fine
Even if I'm not there
I've got a million-man scope
And I'm alright, truly
Even if I seem a little bit dry

Lexy
Senior Member

since 2003-01-28

Posts 1038
California

1 posted 2004-10-30 12:33 PM

I liked the last line, mostly because the tone of the whole poem is sort of monotonous...so it makes sence.

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