Dark Poetry #4 |
The Grave |
silhouetted Senior Member
since 2004-01-30
Posts 537New Zealand |
the blood red roses lie guiltily on the beds of the dead a hungry wolves cry rolls over the hills shadows linger on the misty grass your feet seduce the mossy ground with gentle attempt to reach your destination before its too late your bed cries out to you with moaning infatuation it whispers to you in the night it begs it pleads for you to take that step further into the dark and back again you can crawl, you can creep it doesn't matter how you get there as long as your down on your knees and as you lie down in the dirt hold your breath cause you wont be coming out again *Tres weird this one... a bit of fun.... see how u like put your frustrations into four letter words - incubus |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
WOW... Happiness Runs From Me, For I Am It's Enemy, Anyone Who Has It, Is Someone I Envy... |
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darkness_witch Senior Member
since 2003-12-03
Posts 516Underneath |
oh dude awesome i love it so much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! eeek it rocks so hard! cant wait to see you tomorro! ahh love and empathy darkness nirvana means freedom from pain, suffering and the external world. |
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Hollow_Emptiness Senior Member
since 2004-02-01
Posts 715New Zealand |
Wow, freaky deakie, man. Too much of Joyful Troyful, and not enough pink smokers, had crancole yesterday and today. Anyway, nice as poem. Different but compelling! Hollow. Courtney. I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad. The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had. - Gary Jules, Mad World. |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
I loved it! Awesome poem! Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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vampiana Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 296Nothing and Nowhere |
LURVED IT! i did not "luv" it, nor did i "love" it, i didn't even "looove" it..by god..i LURVED it!! that was so awesome, so brilliantly dark and it made me get those shivery shivers. hehe..i saw you at the mall today! Love, Kurst "I cannot stand the way you tease, I love you though you hurt me so"-Marilyn Manson |
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