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Dark Poetry #4

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symphony_of_thoughts
Member

since 2003-08-03

Posts 95
Somewhere

0 posted 2003-10-19 11:16 PM

What is this
Where am I
Why and how
How and why
Why am I here
Why am I there
I'm everywhere
In this place
It's too small
But so vast
And we all drift
On this dirty ball
Through the blank
Forever and ever
Until we die
And somebody else is born
And then until
The end

Asian Rain
Member

since 2003-10-11

Posts 73

1 posted 2003-10-21 09:32 AM

Questions and thoughts we've all pondered at one time or another. I wonder if we'll ever have all the answers. Nice job on this one!

Asia

swow finix
Junior Member

since 2003-10-17

Posts 14
here but nowhere now

2 posted 2003-10-21 12:04 PM

symphony_of_thoughts

i love your quick and agressive style in this work. "dirty ball" i love that line. i will keep an eye out for more of your work.

swow finix

~be who you want-belive what you want~
~love who you want~

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